Belongs here http://osbot.org/forum/forum/67-gallery/
I'm not trying to offend you or anything, but this is for constructive criticism. It's far too small, too basic. Not enough effects, doesn't stand out, and his of low quality .... jpg?
I do suggest you look up some tutorials on how improve, may I ask what software you used to create this? Do send me a private message if you need any help.