The music kind of overlaps your voice , which makes it kind of hard to understand what you are saying.
The part at minute 2:36 was too long , too loud was annoying to hear.
Also don't show the things you do in between botting the skills, look at Bancock how he does his xD
those are the points i noticed other than that great video , at least now i get to be entertained with something in between Bancock's videos +1