Reflected

I'm sorry but I don't think you will get much out of this. There's a lot to be done and code to make it really functional with all that's needed for someone that's looking to start a private server website. With a bootstrap, that's ever easier to make for different platforms. And when we come to this, as a designer, the background you used is copyright protected. The buyer who uses this as his site might get some troubles. And as a designer you should know and respect that when you sell website or any designs.

you need to work with the lighting and depth a lot. The outer glow on the hand looks silly at the bottom part of the hand and the glow should follow the lights and flow.

Skype; RefGfx I´ll gladly help you out to get started.

http://osbot.org/forum/topic/69072-reflected-designs/

Good share!

in english? Yes, talking in skype

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Get me the font... I won´t do this third time ;) What kind of avatar?

Ye I can do that, but I will have to start all over again. Get me a font you like and PM me it please

I meant 3M OSRS or 6$ Thanks for pointing out

Not bad for a first time. My suggestions; 1. Add shadows to the edges of the background stock, and lightning in the middle. Works well with the borders too. 2. Subtext needs black stroke or drop shadows to pop more up. Main title would look sick, if you duplicate the original layer, place the new below the original, stretch it for like 5px, you´ll see when it looks good, and darken the layer with adjustments. It gives a great 3D feeling without overshooting. 3. Try to place the main title on top of the rest. it does not look good when it gets behind and that way loses focal point. 4. Id also reduce the size of the border/background. It´s a bit too wide

You´re correct.

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Nah, not this time. I used a font I liked that someone else has made to save time. Would be a way cooler tho if the typography would have been done by myself

...pssst! Oi mate... You can have a Signature like that for only 6$ or 3M ORSGP

They would not update the softwares if the newer would not be better. Photoshop CS6 has very nice features and also the old features you are familiar with.

Case Solved.

WOOOOO! 30bucks. And tweeting about it. I smell attention whoring.

add me in skype and I´ll help you out. skype; RefGfx

Change the texts to white gets very hard to read the texts when they are colored the same as background.

Not bad. The background stock you used need some work on it. More work with ligthsources and additional lightsources. The colorscheme is good, but need more shadows/contrast. Also looks better when you darken the edges to drag focal more to the render.

Good luck with the shop. I´d suggest to make the text more visible and take the duplicated text layer off from behind the main text frames. Also making the example more visible would be cool.

Not bad for starter. You need to pick render with better movement and flow. You picked extremely hard ones to make a proper smudge. The renders also have poor colors, so the tags needs a lot of color adjustments, light source manipulation etc. And for last when you do smudge like that, use lighter and darker colors to create depth. Also when you smudge starting from the render to fit and blend it to the background, you use the same colors as the render had on that specific location you started smudging. HINTS: Follow the smudge tutorial you find from the tutorial section to get the basic knowledge how to use the tool and setting. Play around with them and test the outcomes. And when you use smudge tool, use ~90% hardness Keep it up!