DarkzSide Posted March 1, 2015 Share Posted March 1, 2015 First signature in a year, give me some proper feedback. Mostly basic clipping mask and smudge tool, with couple of c4d's and flares.Anyone interested in render, link is below.Render link:http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2014/016/7/f/grand_theft_auto_v_franklin_sniping_render_hd_by_tigertarget-d72f2lg.png 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nas Posted March 1, 2015 Share Posted March 1, 2015 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muffins Posted March 1, 2015 Share Posted March 1, 2015 10/10 could be better -IGN Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oliver Posted March 1, 2015 Share Posted March 1, 2015 It looks awesome, but I would like it more if the original render would be more in the focus. Do you know what I mean? Not sure how to explain lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkzSide Posted March 1, 2015 Author Share Posted March 1, 2015 (edited) It looks awesome, but I would like it more if the original render would be more in the focus. Do you know what I mean? Not sure how to explain lolI know exactly what you mean, focal point is focused a bit too much on the gun and hand area. I noticed that once I saved and took a proper look at it, doesn't affect it too much but thanks for pointing it out.Edit: Unless you meant the clipping mask. Edited March 1, 2015 by DarkzSide 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anne Posted March 2, 2015 Share Posted March 2, 2015 The "shadow" on his face could be better since there is a lot of use of light. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basic Posted March 2, 2015 Share Posted March 2, 2015 Things to work on: Lighting Placement Colors (Overall looking monotone with splashes of other bright colors, this is because you probably used some sort of color mask) Atmo KIU Dark ^_^ 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungWinner Posted March 3, 2015 Share Posted March 3, 2015 You should do a trevor redneck one. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eggsftw1 Posted March 3, 2015 Share Posted March 3, 2015 i think its really good lol i couldnt do any better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reflected Posted March 5, 2015 Share Posted March 5, 2015 Render placement is heavily right sided leaving some odd empty parts in left side as stated above. Also the lightblue lightsources does not go well on top of the render. I´d also like to see more depth as the render it self shouts for depth. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkzSide Posted March 5, 2015 Author Share Posted March 5, 2015 Render placement is heavily right sided leaving some odd empty parts in left side as stated above. Also the lightblue lightsources does not go well on top of the render. I´d also like to see more depth as the render it self shouts for depth. Appreciate your input. ;) As for the right sided render and everything else that was pushed more towards right, it was part of the design. It's an attempted use of Golden Ratio aka Fibonacci sequence. Instead of filling in the whole canvas I left a lot of empty space to push more of the focus on the render and objects surrounding it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pker123 Posted March 6, 2015 Share Posted March 6, 2015 Good joB!@#!# nice owrk man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
