First one is pretty decent. Second one at the right there's like too much C4D. At the left it really fits the render well but at the right it's not that good. Keep going!
I am doing this right now. By the way to fill in a friend's code you need to go to GET NANAS at the top. You need 15,000 nanas in order to do this. So fill in my code guys and get free nanas both of us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
my code : a819666
Search the web a bit first, I dont think you can expect a scripter to teach you from the very beginning. Pretty sure you can find tuts on google and youtube.