GoldenGates Posted September 29, 2013 Posted September 29, 2013 The background is completely random from the chick in the front, but good job nonetheless.
Smart Posted September 29, 2013 Posted September 29, 2013 You should participate in SOTW for sure! You might end up winning one week! Great job it looks excellent, keep up the good work.
Ayushs92 Posted September 29, 2013 Posted September 29, 2013 Why you need the created by 2006? makes it look shit
LiamBaby Posted September 29, 2013 Posted September 29, 2013 The render should be deeper within the background, the focal on the left is much darker than the right side and gets darker too early. The C4D's and other vibrant effects look pretty good, the color flow and composition is pretty great with a few minor flaws. Would not recommend pentooling her hair as it looks like an 8 year old opened paint and scribbled a few outlines on it. Seems like an attempt to blend the pink in? Remove the text too, the text has no flow, no blending, and pretty much ruins the piece. Pretty good, keep it up.
Basic Posted September 29, 2013 Posted September 29, 2013 Can't even take it seriously with that text... \:
Hades Posted September 30, 2013 Author Posted September 30, 2013 not bad The first one is good :-) Can't even take it seriously with that text... \: The render should be deeper within the background, the focal on the left is much darker than the right side and gets darker too early. The C4D's and other vibrant effects look pretty good, the color flow and composition is pretty great with a few minor flaws. Would not recommend pentooling her hair as it looks like an 8 year old opened paint and scribbled a few outlines on it. Seems like an attempt to blend the pink in? Remove the text too, the text has no flow, no blending, and pretty much ruins the piece. Pretty good, keep it up. Why you need the created by 2006? makes it look shit You should participate in SOTW for sure! You might end up winning one week! Great job it looks excellent, keep up the good work. Besides the text it looks amazing Pretty good, you should participate in SOTW! Winners get a special userbar ;D I like it a lot! The background is completely random from the chick in the front, but good job nonetheless. Look good, good job! You spelled opinions wrong. Good though Overall thank you guys! ;) I might actually attend SOTW,and also is this better for the text? 1
Celeos Posted September 30, 2013 Posted September 30, 2013 The text ruins the sig. Overall, looks good. Btw, who's the chick?
