If you changed the colour of the text you would make it look even better as it's kinda hard to see what it says. I suggest a dark colour but one that goes with the other colours of the C4D. Good work!
Waht do u meen?
You gots ta crop dat spam sign, it breaks my screen.
How does one crop an image that has a transparent background?
You mean he needs to l2resize?
Mi english no good, yes.
The first one i'm not too sure about it looks kind of too blurry, the second one although it might have more going on it really just looks like a C4D made to fit the render. Nevertheless I love your text and placement!
Sounds like Jack the Ripper there! I'm happy if you can take the tennis rackets out the court and hit people with it. Fed up with the pool cue and baseball bat weapons!