My uni report on 3D Realms

[Alek]

Download link

 

Click on the gray "Download This File" button and enter in the captcha. It's a short 2-page essay, 99%. Die hard fans of Duke Nukem might appreciate it. 

[Botre]

Grammar Alek pls!

 

 

Although there are a seemingly endless pool of major companies such as Apple, Yahoo!...

 

"..endless pool of major companies such as..." is singular, so it should be "is" not "are".

 

"Although there seems to be an endless pool" instead of " Although there are a seemingly endless pool".

 

 Their blockbuster game that made it happen was the Duke Nukem franchise.

 

A franchise is not a game, but a collection of games.

"Their game (singular) that made it happen" can't be "a collection of games".

 

 

I could take a look at the grammar/style tomorrow if you want.

Would be no hassle

 

Edited January 13, 2015 by Botre

[Alek]

Good thing it's not an English class, I usually only proofread by skimming through once.

[Botre]

Good thing it's not an English class

 

yes

content-wise it's a treat though ^^

[Seks]

Duke nukem was voice acting for logan in chrome.