Novak Posted March 23, 2014 Share Posted March 23, 2014 (edited) well, these are my 1st 2 renders with c4d. lmk what i can improve on/what you think 1st one with diff colors: Edited March 23, 2014 by novak80 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moore Posted March 23, 2014 Share Posted March 23, 2014 Looks sick! Great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kenneh Posted March 23, 2014 Share Posted March 23, 2014 The speaker on the first one looks like you just threw it in there. The second one is okay I guess but looks really plain and something that you could make in gimp in like 2 minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tony21412341 Posted March 23, 2014 Share Posted March 23, 2014 with the first one, the background looks very 2d as compared to the 3d text, was it suppose to be made like that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Novak Posted March 23, 2014 Author Share Posted March 23, 2014 i removed the speaker, i couldn't get the lighting to work with it and the text Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahlaobby Posted March 23, 2014 Share Posted March 23, 2014 not bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catastrophe Posted March 23, 2014 Share Posted March 23, 2014 The first one looks really cool. The second is alright but it just didn't stand out to me;the yellow outline on the blue seems like a bit of a clash. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Togepi Posted March 23, 2014 Share Posted March 23, 2014 like the second one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Novak Posted March 23, 2014 Author Share Posted March 23, 2014 added a new one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dex Posted March 23, 2014 Share Posted March 23, 2014 (edited) Not a lot to say about this, it's simple C4D motext so there's not a lot you can do really... Edited March 23, 2014 by Dex Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Designer Posted March 23, 2014 Share Posted March 23, 2014 Id start with the text placement. now they´re all over in the first one. even when you want to place them like that, remember to keep sme kind of symmetry. Next work work with the effects on the text and also with the colors. now you have light yellow with loght blue. you need shading to add more dark and warm colors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tony21412341 Posted March 23, 2014 Share Posted March 23, 2014 i removed the speaker, i couldn't get the lighting to work with it and the text Well it looks a lot better now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Novak Posted March 23, 2014 Author Share Posted March 23, 2014 Not a lot to say about this, it's simple C4D motext so there's not a lot you can do really... see well, these are my 1st 2 renders with c4d. lmk what i can improve on/what you think i am looking for suggestions on what i need to work on/add/improve with what i have. Its not like i have been doing this for years, i just started today Id start with the text placement. now they´re all over in the first one. even when you want to place them like that, remember to keep sme kind of symmetry. Next work work with the effects on the text and also with the colors. now you have light yellow with loght blue. you need shading to add more dark and warm colors. thank you. ill get working on this Well it looks a lot better now. thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basic Posted March 23, 2014 Share Posted March 23, 2014 Better light room better light placement (if you've placed any at all) better text don't be the wannabe cod youtube graphics designer using the same damn stuff as everyone else be original Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Novak Posted March 23, 2014 Author Share Posted March 23, 2014 Better light room better light placement (if you've placed any at all) better text don't be the wannabe cod youtube graphics designer using the same damn stuff as everyone else be original thanks! by text do you mean font? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
