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Id start with the text placement. now they´re all over in the first one. even when you want to place them like that, remember to keep sme kind of symmetry.

 

Next work work with the effects on the text and also with the colors. now you have light yellow with loght blue. you need shading to add more dark and warm colors.

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Not a lot to say about this, it's simple C4D motext so there's not a lot you can do really...

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well, these are my 1st 2 renders with c4d.  lmk what i can improve on/what you think

 

i am looking for suggestions on what i need to work on/add/improve with what i have.  Its not like i have been doing this for years, i just started today

Id start with the text placement. now they´re all over in the first one. even when you want to place them like that, remember to keep sme kind of symmetry.

 

Next work work with the effects on the text and also with the colors. now you have light yellow with loght blue. you need shading to add more dark and warm colors.

 

thank you.  ill get working on this

Well it looks a lot better now.

thanks

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