well, these are my 1st 2 renders with c4d.  lmk what i can improve on/what you think

 

 

 

 

 

1st one with diff colors:

 

Edited March 23, 201411 yr by novak80

Looks sick! Great work!

The speaker on the first one looks like you just threw it in there. The second one is okay I guess but looks really plain and something that you could make in gimp in like 2 minutes.

with the first one, the background looks very 2d as compared to the 3d text, was it suppose to be made like that?

i removed the speaker, i couldn't get the lighting to work with it and the text

not bad.

The first one looks really cool.

 

The second is alright but it just didn't stand out to me;the yellow outline on the blue seems like a bit of a clash.

like the second one

added a new one

Not a lot to say about this, it's simple C4D motext so there's not a lot you can do really...

Edited March 23, 201411 yr by Dex

Id start with the text placement. now they´re all over in the first one. even when you want to place them like that, remember to keep sme kind of symmetry.

 

Next work work with the effects on the text and also with the colors. now you have light yellow with loght blue. you need shading to add more dark and warm colors.

i removed the speaker, i couldn't get the lighting to work with it and the text

 

Well it looks a lot better now.

Not a lot to say about this, it's simple C4D motext so there's not a lot you can do really...

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well, these are my 1st 2 renders with c4d.  lmk what i can improve on/what you think

 

i am looking for suggestions on what i need to work on/add/improve with what i have.  Its not like i have been doing this for years, i just started today

Id start with the text placement. now they´re all over in the first one. even when you want to place them like that, remember to keep sme kind of symmetry.

 

Next work work with the effects on the text and also with the colors. now you have light yellow with loght blue. you need shading to add more dark and warm colors.

 

thank you.  ill get working on this

Well it looks a lot better now.

thanks

Better light room

better light placement (if you've placed any at all)

better text

don't be the wannabe cod youtube graphics designer using the same damn stuff as everyone else

be original

 

Better light room

better light placement (if you've placed any at all)

better text

don't be the wannabe cod youtube graphics designer using the same damn stuff as everyone else

be original

thanks!  by text do you mean font?