Had a graduate who had a degree in graphics make this, on a scale of 1/10 - How professional is it? Also - Which is better of the two?

 

 

the first one looks amazing, second one looks decent.

 

 

10/10 first

 

 

4/10 second

the first one looks amazing, second one looks decent.

 

 

10/10 first

 

 

4/10 second

 

What do you like/dislike about either?

first one i noticed a terrible error 'if your wish to attend' which put me off it completely

On the second one, all of the gray area with text seems hard/work to read.

 

But the first one's good.

Edited March 20, 201411 yr by zaros784

first one i noticed a terrible error 'if your wish to attend' which put me off it completely

Grammatical errors can be fixed, but the overall professional look can't by the two of them.

Honestly both of them are not that great, but the second one is the best since the first one looks a bit blurry and low quality.

It would be something I can easily reproduce (I'm a hobbyist designer) and it's not extremely creative either.

 

You should check out sites like DeviantArt or Behance, you'll come across some very professional and creative stuff there.

Edited March 20, 201411 yr by Deximal

Honestly both of them are not that great, but the second one is the best since the first one looks a bit blurry and low quality.

It would be something I can easily reproduce (I'm a hobbyist designer) and it's not extremely creative either.

 

You should check out sites like DeviantArt or Behance, you'll come across some very professional and creative stuff there.

Everything can be reproduced, including your work.

 

(No offense though).

Edited March 20, 201411 yr by Stranger

Everything can be reproduced, including your work.

 

(No offense though).

copy paste op

both look great but personally I like the 1st one better

Everything can be reproduced, including your work.

 

(No offense though).

 

I'm just saying it's not very professional nor creative and that's my opinion, I'm also not saying my work is better or that I'm more professional in any way so there's no point in involving my work. The OP asked for people's opnions and I simply provided mine, I hope you understand that.

 

FYI: Not everything can easily be reproduced. Believe me in some cases it still takes a lot of skill and knowledge to simply reproduce a certain style.

Edited March 20, 201411 yr by Deximal

I'm just saying it's not very professional nor creative and that's my opinion, I'm also not saying my work is better or that I'm more professional in any way so there's no point in involving my work. The OP asked for people's opnions and I simply provided mine, I hope you understand that.

 

FYI: Not everything can easily be reproduced. Believe me in some cases it still takes a lot of skill and knowledge to simply reproduce a certain style.

I think you mis-understood my reply.

First of all I never mentioned work can be easily re-producted.

Also I understand what your saying, but I just dont get the point why you would add "easily re-produced" to a opinion.

 

For the second time, no offense.

I think you mis-understood my reply.

First of all I never mentioned work can be easily re-producted.

Also I understand what your saying, but I just dont get the point why you would add "easily re-produced" to a opinion.

For the second time, no offense.

But I did mention it, to clarify my opinion. And none taken.

Anyway, it doesn't matter. My point of view is not going to change by this useless discussion.

Edited March 21, 201411 yr by Deximal

First one is really impressive, 2nd one is pretty good too, but I think a lot more people can make something similar to that

I like both of them but the second one is more appealing to my sense of style, not to mention there is a little blur on the first piece.

 

Very good work though, nevertheless. :lol: