Mister Slyther Posted October 8, 2016 Posted October 8, 2016 (edited) So in uni I have to do visual and historical research on a object. Visual research is extremely important and so I have to come up with multiple pieces of manipulating the mammoth. I think I did alright with this piece, feel free to give me suggestions, i still got time to submit it with my other work: Things to do: - redo the tail. - review whether its over edited or not. Guys just to let you know that nothing is meant to be happening really, just the mammoth standing there. I appreciate all constructive thoughts! version 2: Edited October 9, 2016 by Mister Slyther 1
Jonny Posted October 8, 2016 Posted October 8, 2016 In my honest opinion it doesn't look right, kinda over done.
Unbound Posted October 8, 2016 Posted October 8, 2016 I like it a lot but that the same time I don't. I don't know what the fk is going on.
Mister Slyther Posted October 8, 2016 Author Posted October 8, 2016 In my honest opinion it doesn't look right, kinda over done. I like it a lot but that the same time I don't. I don't know what the fk is going on. Thats alright I understand, i need more feedback to come up with a decision on what edits I should do. 1
Zerker Posted October 8, 2016 Posted October 8, 2016 Even though you have to do manipulation on the mammoth, I don't think the tail works well.
Mister Slyther Posted October 8, 2016 Author Posted October 8, 2016 Even though you have to do manipulation on the mammoth, I don't think the tail works well. Ight thanks for telling me, i think Ill redo the tail.
Benny_ Posted October 8, 2016 Posted October 8, 2016 Yeah not really sure what is going on either but the level of detail is really quite impressive
Mister Slyther Posted October 8, 2016 Author Posted October 8, 2016 Yeah not really sure what is going on either but the level of detail is really quite impressive There is nothing that is meant to be happening, just the mammoth standing there.
fstyle Posted October 8, 2016 Posted October 8, 2016 I think it's fine at first glance, but it looks very 2 dimensional when stared at for like 5 secs or so.
Adapt Posted October 8, 2016 Posted October 8, 2016 The color correction doesn't really feel fitting. I also feel like the environment the elephant is in needs a touch up and needs to stand out more. A couple things I would remove/change: http://prntscr.com/crdwly - this almost just looks like it was thrown on there for "effect". http://prntscr.com/crdwq7 - these stand out way too much, I would use a different mask. http://prntscr.com/crdxf0 - the multiple eyes or w/e they are could be placed a bit differently and they need more emphasis. the tusks are hard to see as well, try removing the texture from them like the horns/tusks on its back. Also, the tail is odd. I would look probably have kept that a normal elephant tail or maybe a lions tail? Other than that, it's a cool concept and looks like it could turn out really nice.
