It isn't "amazing".
The text placement is pretty good, you filled in the empty space, I just don't like how the render was placed.
I also don't like the lens flares at the top, they're random as hell... The effects around the focal are well placed, I think this piece would look a lot better if it wasn't so... idk how to put it, faded maybe? We'll just say faded lol. Looks very low quality because of this, if it was bright and high quality I would have liked it.
It's decent, but I wouldn't call it amazing
I think the render was placed in a good place (refering to the rule of thirds). I think the clouded affect really adds to it as the render seems like it was originally cartoonist. However I can exactly see what you mean and I'd suggest he use it more selectively. Its a matter of opinion and I can see how different tastes would effect this. That said, you can tell he's very experienced.
I wouldn't say very experienced either... You must not go to graphic sites then.
<-- this artist is very experienced.
Can't tell if you're being serious.
Edit: I knew I had seen that before, I know that artist, he is experienced, however that tag isn't too attractive.
Skill