Nice improvement! just adjust the text in the middle of the banner and it looks nice. Maybe another text layer behind the actual text layer with slight motion blur and put it on screen/color dodge and play with the opacity.
Also id remoce the small lightbursts below the text and add more shading there. The light comes from above afterall
texts are way too blended. also the thing in the middle confuses me. texts also needs some shading. What did you do on it? abstract texture, text on top of it with beveling and hard blend?
Not really, it was easy to farm the points if wanted. And as we have seen before, winning sotw does not always mean you have the skills/knowledge to earn point to get specific higher ranks.