Clever thread design for honey pot

[Making Rice]

 

Edited June 14, 2015 by Making Rice

[Fruity]

Love the idea and the coloursof it but one thing is bugging me :3

 

 

Its touching! ahhhh

 

Also imo i think that the spacing between the lines is a little to big here :

Edited June 14, 2015 by Fruity

[Sky]

Something about the font is iffy to me but I couldn't tell you how to make it better.

 

Great design overall. 

[legacycm]

 

Mispelt.

[Making Rice]

Love the idea and the coloursof it but one thing is bugging me :3

 

 

Its touching! ahhhh

 

Also imo i think that the spacing between the lines is a little to big here :

didnt notice the first and yeah i wanted to fill space didnt know what else to do

 

 

 

and thanks @Asuna but iddidnt know what font too

 

 

@legacycm

you dont need to point out typos. I DO NOT do the text, i simply copy & paste what client writes.. again I DO NOT write the text

Edited June 14, 2015 by Making Rice

[legacycm]

Lol, I thought the client provided a generalized script in which you would make adaptations to. Sorry!

[Making Rice]

Lol, I thought the client provided a generalized script in which you would make adaptations to. Sorry!

I'm an English student who doesn't proof read... Or read in general

[Baller]

Great design, but I don't like the text  

[Making Rice]

Great design, but I don't like the text

Nobody does but he has ecstatic