Sup dudez, was wondering if I could get some feedback on this. Started using C4D Textures and lighting effects, realizing it now I overcompensated for the lighting imo. But I'd be glad to receive things to help in any way!

 

Edited January 28, 201412 yr by Bunka

The text seems a little plain. If the image had a more simplistic style, then the text'd be find, but it doesn't. Work on the text more, and it should look pretty nice.

I like the bottom sig you currently got, just reduce the outer glow on 'BUNKA' and take off most of it's fancy effects, something similar to the 'Graphic Designer' is nice

Agreed with the above post, text seems to plain and the area above looks like pointless whitespace.

Both are very nice, but I think they seem a bit too light, maybe make some parts light and some parts darker if possible?

 

 

Definitely try and focus on creating better text buddy, other than that good job

Improvement?

 

Improvement?

It's better. But you blurred it a little bit too much imo. And try to fill up the black parts.

Thank you everyone for the feedback, much appreciated! 

Edited January 28, 201412 yr by Bunka

Text looks better now.

should edit the text, your siggy is nicer in my eyes

You should look up vids on how to work with text.. it can literally ruin or make your sig.

meh i think it's a 6/10 tho 

Sasuke , looks good.

Remove the text

Whatever you're doing to it that makes it look so low quality, stop it.

Fill the empty space

add depth

add blending on the render to the BG

There's no FG.

Crop your signature, way too much empty space even if you fill it.

 

Look, just a crop makes it look so much better.

 

Remove your border, those are way too oldschool. (Unless it's something like framing)

 

KIU, Look at some tutorials mang. (I have a thread in the tutorials section)