I wanted to make a company logo  serve the same purpose as the logo that Razer has (that snake thing) the companies name is summit and they are a gaming brand who's aim is for there clients to be able to "reach their peak" hence the slogan, let me know what you guys think. I've tried to keep the mountain image quite simple, I'd love to hear where you think I can improve. 

 

http://gyazo.com/be2087154400d643043ebc7acfe88b32

use a cleaner font for the slogan

try changing the red glow to white or get rid of it

for the mountain don't change the density, only the thickness

make all the blue the same shade of blue

align everything to the center

make it square

change the black to a dark grey

have a thin border on the inside using the same shade of blue

 

made this real fast

Edited October 30, 201411 yr by Sentende

use a cleaner font for the slogan

try changing the red glow to white or get rid of it

for the mountain don't change the density, only the thickness

make all the blue the same shade of blue

align everything to the center

make it square

change the black to a dark grey

have a thin border on the inside using the same shade of blue

Awesome tips.

I'd go with these.

use a cleaner font for the slogan

try changing the red glow to white or get rid of it

for the mountain don't change the density, only the thickness

make all the blue the same shade of blue

align everything to the center

make it square

change the black to a dark grey

have a thin border on the inside using the same shade of blue

 

made this real fast

 

still kinda hate the text but the idea is a whole lot better 

still kinda hate the text but the idea is a whole lot better 

lol the font is arial, was default cause i cbf finding one

i don't like the font, try Comic sans its my fav, but the logo is awesome 

if anyone is interested at all, this is the logo i made for him