Judge our raps

[Mackadizzle]

This is embarassing, but me and a friend made 2 verses about random topics that we gave eachother. The first rap is about pancakes. The second one is about a cat 

 

Rap 1

 

woke up late, i was feelin kinda hungry

walked in the kitchen to put some nummies in my tummy

opened up the fridge, took a look around

aint nothin in there, man that made me frown 

so i walked to the cabinet, opened it up,

some pancake mix? ngga, thats wassup!

dont act like you dont know, pancakes are the shit,

i wish i could eat em everyday, i swear i wouldnt quit

but back to my story, man i gotta hurry, if i want some pancakes i gotta make em before 430, 

i gotta be at work, i only got a hour, and before i go i gotta brush my teeth n take a shower 

so im sittin here debatin, time is just wastin

do i wanna make em or am i gonna leave hungry. 

i aint spendin money, i guess i got no choice, i took out the mix,  singin in my rick james voice 

-chorus- 

 DOO DOO DOO DOOOOOOO, I LOVE PANCAAAAAAKES

 

Rap 2 

 

awwwwww yeah

check it out y'all

nalizzle in the hizzle

yeahh..

scratch ma ears and make me purr

, I'm soft as cotton yeah feel my fur

give me catnip, oh it makes me high,

don't touch my belly or I'll make you cry

yea I'm cute as shit and like to cuddle,

but be careful around me for it can be subtle

if my tail is poofy and my eyes are wide,

you better run fast and find a find a place to hide

you might think its a joke, laughin at my paws,

but ngga it aint a game, look at my claws

 

Edited May 15, 2014 by Mackadizzle

[senkido]

no no know this is not rappin.

spit it out in a video with a beat

or do a freestyle.

It is very easy to type out raps, peope do it all the dam time on youtube.

[Mackadizzle]

no no know this is not rappin. spit it out in a video with a beat or do a freestyle. It is very easy to type out raps, peope do it all the dam time on youtube.

the point wasnt to make it "hard" or anything lmfao. we never said it wasnt easy to type it out, thats not even the point. there was no point. just making verses about random shit

[Nalizzle]

2nd one is definitely better without a doubt

[Jams]

0/10 both are bad

[Scotty]

Cat man, you two sound awesome rapping about pancakes and cats, don't let anyone tell you differently!