1st.. don´t want to say anything about that than bad showout

 

2nd; looks decent. I recommend to use another font in each section to make it more ease on eye. Also the colors ain´t attractive and does not catch your eye in any way.

I don't think they're great, but I'd definitely choose the first one over the second one

first is blurry and grainy. 

 

2nd is more better looking tho the colors ain´t attractive and Id use more than just one font

Cheers guys, first one was made by a Graduate of graphics, second one I replicated to see how I could do - I'm aware the font isn't the best, I was just a bit annoyed that my friend said that the first one was done by a graduate and is a professional flyer -_-

Not too proffesional, work some on the concturs!

nice

1st one better imo,
Just looks smooth & easy to read

As mentioned beforehand though, the grammatical error did also pop-out at me too, lowering my opinion, other than that, I love it

Replace the first top half with this, first one is better cause it actually looks like a leaflet, where as second one kinda looks like a thread layout. Text is too bulky on the second and it's a lot easier on the eyes to look at the first.

 

 

I'm am unsure on what to say for both.

I like them both. little more creativity around the paper on the first tho