Designer Posted March 21, 2014 Share Posted March 21, 2014 1st.. don´t want to say anything about that than bad showout 2nd; looks decent. I recommend to use another font in each section to make it more ease on eye. Also the colors ain´t attractive and does not catch your eye in any way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dog_ Posted March 22, 2014 Share Posted March 22, 2014 I don't think they're great, but I'd definitely choose the first one over the second one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Designer Posted March 22, 2014 Share Posted March 22, 2014 first is blurry and grainy. 2nd is more better looking tho the colors ain´t attractive and Id use more than just one font Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iiconnor Posted March 26, 2014 Author Share Posted March 26, 2014 Cheers guys, first one was made by a Graduate of graphics, second one I replicated to see how I could do - I'm aware the font isn't the best, I was just a bit annoyed that my friend said that the first one was done by a graduate and is a professional flyer -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Softarn Posted March 26, 2014 Share Posted March 26, 2014 Not too proffesional, work some on the concturs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pollywog Posted March 27, 2014 Share Posted March 27, 2014 nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hopsin Posted March 28, 2014 Share Posted March 28, 2014 1st one better imo,Just looks smooth & easy to readAs mentioned beforehand though, the grammatical error did also pop-out at me too, lowering my opinion, other than that, I love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Posted March 28, 2014 Share Posted March 28, 2014 Replace the first top half with this, first one is better cause it actually looks like a leaflet, where as second one kinda looks like a thread layout. Text is too bulky on the second and it's a lot easier on the eyes to look at the first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sex Posted April 3, 2014 Share Posted April 3, 2014 I'm am unsure on what to say for both. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brisse Posted April 18, 2014 Share Posted April 18, 2014 I like them both. little more creativity around the paper on the first tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
