Stealer Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 (edited) Tell me what you think. Please be honest. I REALLY want to know how I am doing. Edited June 9, 2013 by Stealer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BotRS123 Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 I think it looks really good. The text color looks a little plain, so if you could do something to that, it would be even better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stealer Posted June 8, 2013 Author Share Posted June 8, 2013 I think it looks really good. The text color looks a little plain, so if you could do something to that, it would be even better. Thank you very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toadfly Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 Looks really good, especially for a first signature! I'd suggest putting gloss, or perhaps even a nice light gradient on your text, and try to spice it up a little bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exx Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 Looks very good i like the plain text :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Occazn Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 Reminds me of litle big planet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raflesia Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 It looks great! I think the text could use some more detail/effects, though. But still, very, very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stealer Posted June 8, 2013 Author Share Posted June 8, 2013 Thank you all. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 Not bad. I'd like to see more colors, but other than that it looks pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stealer Posted June 8, 2013 Author Share Posted June 8, 2013 Not bad. I'd like to see more colors, but other than that it looks pretty good. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basic Posted June 9, 2013 Share Posted June 9, 2013 Not much you can do with MOTEXT. It's the most simple thing in the world. Your lighting is coming from.... where? You're probably using a nice lightbox. But for it to look real, you have to add your own lightsource in photoshop. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuri Posted June 9, 2013 Share Posted June 9, 2013 Well, I think the first thing.. before you focus on the specific technicalities of an artwork, is that you know what you're trying to do with your art. When you present a signature, what theme are you going with? What is that certain piece trying to convey? Artistically thinking is one of the key to become an artist. I personally like the simplicty of the text, however you'd have to account for certain elements that you used in the signature. You used an effect behind the text, basically as if something crashed onto a wall and blew it up into pieces. I'd have to think it would have been better if you used a different kind of font, probably a font a bit more rusty/edged/grunged. It would appear in a way that it follows and is more consistent to the elements present in the work that you did. This kind of font you used is round-ish, and gives a sense of bouncy, happy, playful feel, which as you can see, does not really play any consistency with the theme that the signature suggest. However, this is just my opinion. If you just want to tldr; I think you should have used a different font. I like the colors, by the way. But you can do some work with your light sources. Did you furnish this in PS after using C4D? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ledo Posted June 9, 2013 Share Posted June 9, 2013 Import it to Photoshop and start spamming it with flares, fractals and all the other stuff people love. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koy Posted June 9, 2013 Share Posted June 9, 2013 Thank you. Thank you all. (: Thank you very much. Please just use the like button. ;) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
