Tell me what you think. Please be honest. I REALLY want to know how I am doing.

 

 

Edited June 9, 201312 yr by Stealer

I think it looks really good. The text color looks a little plain, so if you could do something to that, it would be even better.

I think it looks really good. The text color looks a little plain, so if you could do something to that, it would be even better.

 

Thank you very much.

Looks really good, especially for a first signature! I'd suggest putting gloss, or perhaps even a nice light gradient on your text, and try to spice it up a little bit.

Looks very good i like the plain text :3

Reminds me of litle big planet.

It looks great! I think the text could use some more detail/effects, though. But still, very, very nice!

Thank you all. (:

Not bad. I'd like to see more colors, but other than that it looks pretty good.

Not bad. I'd like to see more colors, but other than that it looks pretty good.

 

Thank you.

Not much you can do with MOTEXT. It's the most simple thing in the world.

 

Your lighting is coming from.... where? You're probably using a nice lightbox. But for it to look real, you have to add your own lightsource in photoshop. 

 

 

Well, I think the first thing.. before you focus on the specific technicalities of an artwork, is that you know what you're trying to do with your art. When you present a signature, what theme are you going with? What is that certain piece trying to convey? Artistically thinking is one of the key to become an artist. I personally like the simplicty of the text, however you'd have to account for certain elements that you used in the signature.

 

You used an effect behind the text, basically as if something crashed onto a wall and blew it up into pieces. I'd have to think it would have been better if you used a different kind of font, probably a font a bit more rusty/edged/grunged. It would appear in a way that it follows and is more consistent to the elements present in the work that you did. This kind of font you used is round-ish, and gives a sense of bouncy, happy, playful feel, which as you can see, does not really play any consistency with the theme that the signature suggest.

 

However, this is just my opinion. If you just want to tldr; I think you should have used a different font. I like the colors, by the way. But you can do some work with your light sources. Did you furnish this in PS after using C4D?

Import it to Photoshop and start spamming it with flares, fractals and all the other stuff people love.

Thank you.

Thank you all. (:

Thank you very much.

Please just use the like button. ;)