Nilssonzor Posted November 14, 2013 Share Posted November 14, 2013 (edited) 3 signatures made by me, just feel free to comment what you think about them, I could also release them, if someone wants! xD Edited November 14, 2013 by Nilssonzor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basic Posted November 14, 2013 Share Posted November 14, 2013 Do you want constructive critiscm? Beware; I'm harsh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nilssonzor Posted November 14, 2013 Author Share Posted November 14, 2013 Do you want constructive critiscm? Beware; I'm harsh. I am just accepting constructive critiscm because that's makes you an better designer. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Designer Posted November 15, 2013 Share Posted November 15, 2013 In the first one the scan lines should be way less visible. the floating head lacks focal point. Also the background is messy and full of everything atm. In the second the render is too blurred and again the focal point is lost. my eyes keep wandering trough the sig but can´t get anything out of it. the third one I actually like a lot! the smudging looks good, colors are good and the text placement works Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nilssonzor Posted November 19, 2013 Author Share Posted November 19, 2013 In the first one the scan lines should be way less visible. the floating head lacks focal point. Also the background is messy and full of everything atm. In the second the render is too blurred and again the focal point is lost. my eyes keep wandering trough the sig but can´t get anything out of it. the third one I actually like a lot! the smudging looks good, colors are good and the text placement works Thank you a lot for your cc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikasa Posted November 19, 2013 Share Posted November 19, 2013 I like the renders of the first 2, would be nice if they weren't so dim though, make them stand out a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levi Posted November 19, 2013 Share Posted November 19, 2013 Looking good buddy Keep it up, I look forward to seeing more of you. Also you seem like you have the skill to enter SOTW, check it out because if you win you get a cool user bar and glow http://osbot.org/forum/topic/25781-sotw-week-9/#entry291360 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nilssonzor Posted November 19, 2013 Author Share Posted November 19, 2013 Looking good buddy Keep it up, I look forward to seeing more of you. Also you seem like you have the skill to enter SOTW, check it out because if you win you get a cool user bar and glow http://osbot.org/forum/topic/25781-sotw-week-9/#entry291360 I have entered 2 SOTW's, the first one I lost with 1 point, and the second is currently up voting right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levi Posted November 19, 2013 Share Posted November 19, 2013 Looking good buddy Keep it up, I look forward to seeing more of you. Also you seem like you have the skill to enter SOTW, check it out because if you win you get a cool user bar and glow http://osbot.org/forum/topic/25781-sotw-week-9/#entry291360 I have entered 2 SOTW's, the first one I lost with 1 point, and the second is currently up voting right now. That's great to here, good luck buddy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nilssonzor Posted November 19, 2013 Author Share Posted November 19, 2013 Looking good buddy Keep it up, I look forward to seeing more of you. Also you seem like you have the skill to enter SOTW, check it out because if you win you get a cool user bar and glow http://osbot.org/forum/topic/25781-sotw-week-9/#entry291360 I have entered 2 SOTW's, the first one I lost with 1 point, and the second is currently up voting right now. That's great to here, good luck buddy Thank you!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitrousek Posted November 24, 2013 Share Posted November 24, 2013 3rd one bad text placement, and could be done a little better 1st one looks dull, and is overall kind of weak, blends in too much 2nd one, not much to say, not my style. (overglowed, nothing special) I have entered 2 SOTW's, the first one I lost with 1 point, and the second is currently up voting right now. I have entered 1 SOTW, and won 1 SOTW. 100% win ratio, and I'll let it stay that way - some people here have disgusting tastes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lotion Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 I like the first one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...