I've asked multiple designers and they liked my work.
1, it is not too cracked.
2, I clearly mentioned that my smoke isn't the best nor my animating skills when it comes to animating smoke. In fact I'm still a beginner with animations :p
3, I checked your work and I will admit that ur work is pretty average. I don't feel appealed by it.
Note: If that is how you really feel, then okay that is your opinion tbh.
Thank you.