Jkbapeh
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pm me if you still need
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nice thank you
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Nice piece man, only way you'll improve is if you keep bangin stuff out !
I like this piece so take my post as constructive criticism from another viewers perspective
Text: Color choice, Blending, font choice etc... Not bad at all, buttttt the placement seems a bit off to me its taking away from the focal being next to the face of wiz.
Background: Again not bad at all, Im into using the space type shit in my work too, but its kind of random lol, like hes just chillen in space(probably stoned a fck haha) and like jinx said that white line is bothering the crap outta me lol.
Lighting: the lighting is kind of weird, but it seems like you might have used to moon as the light source in a way so you got the idea just gotta improve on it.
Focal: Blending is good, I dig the little extra effects & stuff on the bottom that gives it a flashy feel. I would sharpen face, chain and tatts and slowly blur out the bg and it would stick out more.
7/10
with adjustments could be closer to 8.5-9/10, keep up the goodwork man !
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ahh man reminds me of the first time I learned animation lol.
Keep up the good work, as others said;
lower the tint opacity or set it to a lighter blending mode like maybe "soft light" cause right now it looks like a white line going thruugh your text, not a tint lol.
Also as other said, put the tint line on an angle.
Good luck and keep at it bro, I honestly hate working with animation, esp. in photoshop its kind of ass and tedious
*oh yeah and try learning to fade your frames they will transition smoother!*
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Simple yet efficient, what a logo is meant for.
I approve, good work man !
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would be nice
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Good idea it'll keep all the unnecessary shit people put in their signatures to minimum and look a lot better.
But im sure everyone wants to advertise their services everywhere they can so..
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Code Word: Gerkin
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Not sure if you want both together, I could do the website just don't have enough time lately so I wouldn't be able to, if you need the favicon done, just PM me the info.
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Not bad just the left & right side should be erased a little imo to keep the sig from showing the canvas size boundaries
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I seen some kid other night, his RSN was "Piff" I was sickkkk I want that Rsn so bad =( .
I've seen a lot of really funny name on OSRS tho I can't lie
GoogleMyYahoo
Biggest Poop
BurnDaBCH
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yea seen it on the stream that's lame least he made some money lol
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I don't think thats the girl from twilight lol
but...
Datkleavage
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Hostility in The Osbot Hood
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GL Rebuilding
Edit: Jk
Good luck to everyone wanting to catch up and may the forums always be spammed and poorly moderated! lelelelelelelel
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Restricted gg.
All the bitches love a restricted ********a
Same here. He didn't like my 'pls'.
Buy 54 posts = 5 day ban. 16 posts = 5 day ban. Appeal = perm ban.
lol'd.
He despises you lol
Yeah, I know. I could tell that a little before/after I resigned.
Yeah
Why can't you say n1gg@ here...
filters m8 filters.
There's filters, but they didn't fix this big quote train thing. It's actually pretty annoying looking at, lol.
Yeah ikr lol this needs to be fixed asap
On pb you'd get banned for quote training like this
On pb, you'd get banned for anything.
its in spam so no fvcks are given about the quote train
its in spam so no fvcks are given about the quote train
Idc it's annoying as fuck to see them
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its in spam so no fvcks are given about the quote train
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how n were
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gewdsht
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SWaqKJK,L
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m,kiodxsca
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Not a fan of the whole 3D shit on bot forums, but looks good
C&C
-Fix Lighting
-Fix end of text
-Clear up the Text, should be focal, other stuff should be Background
For first time good job, keep it up brotha =)
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for a square one newb looks good, keep it up. Focus on learning some blending, lighting/light source and overall depth and you'll make big improvments