Include Posted June 26, 2015 Share Posted June 26, 2015 Not bad i suppose 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuakedM8 Posted June 26, 2015 Share Posted June 26, 2015 Good job on first attempt. Get some popcorn and get ready for some constructive criticism. Well first of all, remove the typography, its useless and doesn't fit in there, I recommend not using any text/typography in your tags unless you know what you're doing and know where to put it. The canvas seems pretty empty, i like how you blurred the background but the canvas seems really empty, add some C4D renders, add some fractals but remember to not just throw it in there and not edit it. Add some gradient maps and other effects and mess around with curves etc;. Good job on adding a layer with a black brush around the edges, it looks good but the opacity needs to be lowered a little. Add lighting, add a new layer and use the brush and use soft brush and add one not too large spot somewhere preferably at the top left and put the layer on color dodge or whatever seems to fit best. I wish you best of luck in the future, I'm no expert but I do know some of my stuff. Keep practicing my son, one day you'll be as good as @Scotty KIU and good job Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted June 26, 2015 Share Posted June 26, 2015 Looks great! Nice and trippy :p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RSPSM Posted June 26, 2015 Share Posted June 26, 2015 Nice Work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darvinb98 Posted June 26, 2015 Share Posted June 26, 2015 Really nice imo :> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volta Posted June 26, 2015 Share Posted June 26, 2015 (edited) Waluigi! Good job on first attempt. Get some popcorn and get ready for some constructive criticism. Well first of all, remove the typography, its useless and doesn't fit in there, I recommend not using any text/typography in your tags unless you know what you're doing and know where to put it. The canvas seems pretty empty, i like how you blurred the background but the canvas seems really empty, add some C4D renders, add some fractals but remember to not just throw it in there and not edit it. Add some gradient maps and other effects and mess around with curves etc;. Good job on adding a layer with a black brush around the edges, it looks good but the opacity needs to be lowered a little. Add lighting, add a new layer and use the brush and use soft brush and add one not too large spot somewhere preferably at the top left and put the layer on color dodge or whatever seems to fit best. I wish you best of luck in the future, I'm no expert but I do know some of my stuff. Keep practicing my son, one day you'll be as good as @Scotty KIU and good job Constructive criticism: do this, do this, do this, do this ... Edited June 26, 2015 by Volta 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Include Posted June 26, 2015 Author Share Posted June 26, 2015 Thanks everyone ;) Appreciate the comments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DubzieBug Posted June 26, 2015 Share Posted June 26, 2015 That looks good keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...