Could you please correct this quick ?

Thanks a lot <3

 

Human microchips: 19 Mar 15

 

The podcast that I listed to was about human microchips.

It all started with an interview about a person and his passwords.

The interview asked him how many passwords he has and on the response that it were many, the interviewer asked him, if it wouldn’t be brilliant to have human microchips.

The podcast continued with some talk about a study in sweden where scientists are working on a microchips you get implemented under your skin with which help you never have to remember any passwords again. The microchip is able to identify you, you wouldn’t even have to carry money with you anymore. Both interview parties agreed that they wouldn’t like to have an microchip under their skin, they find it very intersting though! Later on in the interview they also made a small quiz about passwords, like which one is the weakest and most used in 2014 . In the end the interviewer said the most used and weakest one was „123456“. The podcast ends and both agreed that they guess that one day, everyone is going to have some kind of human microchips in order identify under the skin.

       The podcast that I listed to was about human microchips. It began with an interview about a person and his passwords. The interviewer asked how many passwords he has, to which the interviewee replied many. The interviewer then asked how brilliant it would be to have human microchips. The podcast continued with some talk about a study in Sweden where scientists are working on microchips that are implemented under your skin which help you remember your passwords. The microchip is able to identify you. One wouldn't even have to carry their money with them anymore.

 

      Both interview parties agreed that they wouldn't like to have a microchip under their skin, but they find it very interesting. Later on in the interview they also made a small quiz about passwords, like which one is the weakest and most used in 2014. In the end the interviewer said the most used and weakest one was "123456". The podcast ends and both agreed that they guess that one day, everyone is going to have some kind of human microchip under the skin used for identification. 

 

edit; capitalization

 

not bad, just your use of wouldn't is repetitive and redundant at times. I understood what you were saying, it was just a bit choppy. 

Edited March 23, 201510 yr by Takeoff

Human microchips: 19 Mar 15

 

   The podcast that I listened to was about human microchips. It all started with an interview about a person and how he stored his passwords.

In the interviewer asked him how many passwords he had, and he responded by telling them he had many just like everyone else. The interviewer then asked him a second question. How would he feel about having a microchip which could store all of those passwords for him in one place?

 

   The podcast proceeded on with some talk about a study in Sweden where scientists are working on a microchips you get implemented under your skin! With this technology you would never have to remember any passwords ever again. The microchip is able to identify you individually, which opens up possibilities beyond just passwords; you wouldn’t even have to carry money with you anymore!  Both interview parties agreed that they wouldn’t like to have an microchip under their skin, but they do however find the technology extremely interesting.

   

   Later on in the interview they had a small quiz on passwords. In the quiz they talked about which password was the weakest and most commonly used in 2014. The weakest password was "123456“. The interview then concluded and everyone agreed; with this technology coming into play human microchips are soon to be an industry standard.

 

 

Good enough? Would be better if I had direct quotes lol

Edited March 23, 201510 yr by Cruelhitz

 

       The podcast that I listed to was about human microchips. It began with an interview about a person and his passwords. The interviewer asked how many passwords he has, to which the interviewee replied many. The interviewer then asked how brilliant it would be to have human microchips. The podcast continued with some talk about a study in Sweden where scientists are working on microchips that are  implemented under your skin which help you remember your passwords. The microchip is able to identify you. One wouldn't even have to carry their money with them anymore.

 

      Both interview parties agreed that they wouldn't like to have a microchip under their skin, but they find it very interesting. Later on in the interview they also made a small quiz about passwords, like which one is the weakest and most used in 2014 . In the end the interviewer said the most used and weakest one was "123456". The podcast ends and both agreed that they guess that one day, everyone is going to have some kind of human microchip under the skin used for identification. 

 

edit; capitalization

 

not bad, just your use of wouldn't is repetitive and redundant at times. I understood what you were saying, it was just a bit choppy. 

 

 

 

 

Human microchips: 19 Mar 15

 

The podcast that I listed to was about human microchips. It all started with an interview about a person and how he stored his passwords.

In the interviewer asked him how many passwords he had, and he responded by telling them he had many just like everyone else. The interviewer then asked him a second question. How would he feel about having a microchip which could store all of those passwords for him in one place?

The podcast proceeded on with some talk about a study in Sweden where scientists are working on a microchips you get implemented under your skin! With this technology you would never have to remember any passwords ever again. The microchip is able to identify you individually. This opens up possibilities beyond just passwords; you wouldn’t even have to carry money with you anymore! Both interview parties agreed that they wouldn’t like to have an microchip under their skin, but they do however find the technology extremely interesting. Later on in the interview they had a small quiz on passwords. In the quiz they talked about which password was the weakest and most commonly used in 2014. The weakest password was "123456“. The interview then concluded and everyone agreed. With this technology coming into play human microchips are soon to be an industry standard.

 

 

Good enough? Would be better if I had direct quotes lol

 

 

 

Thanks so much guys!

Thanks so much guys!

 

I edited again to divide it into proper paragraphs lol

 

       The podcast that I listed to was about human microchips. It began with an interview about a person and his passwords. The interviewer asked how many passwords he has, to which the interviewee replied many. The interviewer then asked how brilliant it would be to have human microchips. The podcast continued with some talk about a study in Sweden where scientists are working on microchips that are implemented under your skin which help you remember your passwords. The microchip is able to identify you. One wouldn't even have to carry their money with them anymore.

 

      Both interview parties agreed that they wouldn't like to have a microchip under their skin, but they find it very interesting. Later on in the interview they also made a small quiz about passwords, like which one is the weakest and most used in 2014. In the end the interviewer said the most used and weakest one was "123456". The podcast ends and both agreed that they guess that one day, everyone is going to have some kind of human microchip under the skin used for identification. 

 

edit; capitalization

 

not bad, just your use of wouldn't is repetitive and redundant at times. I understood what you were saying, it was just a bit choppy. 

 

 

 

 

Human microchips: 19 Mar 15

 

   The podcast that I listed to was about human microchips. It all started with an interview about a person and how he stored his passwords.

In the interviewer asked him how many passwords he had, and he responded by telling them he had many just like everyone else. The interviewer then asked him a second question. How would he feel about having a microchip which could store all of those passwords for him in one place?

 

   The podcast proceeded on with some talk about a study in Sweden where scientists are working on a microchips you get implemented under your skin! With this technology you would never have to remember any passwords ever again. The microchip is able to identify you individually, which opens up possibilities beyond just passwords; you wouldn’t even have to carry money with you anymore!  Both interview parties agreed that they wouldn’t like to have an microchip under their skin, but they do however find the technology extremely interesting.

   

   Later on in the interview they had a small quiz on passwords. In the quiz they talked about which password was the weakest and most commonly used in 2014. The weakest password was "123456“. The interview then concluded and everyone agreed. With this technology coming into play human microchips are soon to be an industry standard.

 

 

Good enough? Would be better if I had direct quotes lol

 

So both of you didn't even notice that he wrote 'listed' instead of 'listened'?

So both of you didn't even notice that he wrote 'listed' instead of 'listened'?

 

*Edits* Don't know what you're referring too

So both of you didn't even notice that he wrote 'listed' instead of 'listened'?

lmao no it wasn't squigglied 

 

 

 

So both neither of you didn't even notice noticed that he wrote 'listed' instead of 'listened'?

Edited March 23, 201510 yr by Takeoff

Thanks again everyone!

lmao no it wasn't squigglied 

 

 

 

So both neither of you didn't even notice noticed that he wrote 'listed' instead of 'listened'?

I never asked for you to correct my sentences. English isn't my mother tongue.