whips Posted April 21, 2014 Share Posted April 21, 2014 5am no sleep - - - - - - - - - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikasa Posted April 21, 2014 Share Posted April 21, 2014 Looks pretty good You good with smudging? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Booch Posted April 21, 2014 Share Posted April 21, 2014 Wow nice work buddy, love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zaros784 Posted April 21, 2014 Share Posted April 21, 2014 The top right corner being empty bothers me, but other than that, looks awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kinetic Posted April 21, 2014 Share Posted April 21, 2014 Top left lighting isn't executed really well. Also the render isn't that well blended in with the background Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Designer Posted April 21, 2014 Share Posted April 21, 2014 (edited) Lacks focal point. Needs filling on the empty spaces and lights /lightsource is off Also when you look at it more closely you can see the stacked c4d renders as bg and the render separated without actual blend effects. There´s something to consider improving Edited April 21, 2014 by Designer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chemistry Posted April 22, 2014 Share Posted April 22, 2014 Surprisingly flat looking, probably due to the adjustments and gradient maps added at the end. Try adding maps and adjustments between stacked effects to increase the depth using contrast and coloring. I do like the colors for the most part, but perhaps some small sections should be adjusted and tweaked. You probably need some artificial lighting to blend the focal with the background, but you also might consider removing some of what is in front of your render (her arm gets kind of lost). It's been a good while since I've tagged. You're inspiring me 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
