Lockmonster00 Posted December 18, 2013 Share Posted December 18, 2013 (edited) Edited December 18, 2013 by Lockmonster00 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan Posted December 18, 2013 Share Posted December 18, 2013 The ideas and style are nice I just think it needs a better finish. More details and focals as well as a different font + color scheme. Not bad though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dex Posted December 18, 2013 Share Posted December 18, 2013 I agree with Jordan, it needs better blending and a different font for sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lockmonster00 Posted December 18, 2013 Author Share Posted December 18, 2013 What kind of font would ya'll suggest? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basic Posted December 18, 2013 Share Posted December 18, 2013 This looks dope man, add in some nice lighting and fx and it's dope. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Designer Posted December 18, 2013 Share Posted December 18, 2013 Different font imo too. Also needs so work work lightsource and shading. Now it´s all over too bright and due that lacks focal point. Only thing that catches the eye is the pink text that is powering out heavily. I´d use slight darker red to make it easier for the eye and to blend more with rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supreme H Posted December 18, 2013 Share Posted December 18, 2013 oooo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...