Lockmonster00 Posted December 18, 2013 Posted December 18, 2013 (edited) Edited December 18, 2013 by Lockmonster00
Jordan Posted December 18, 2013 Posted December 18, 2013 The ideas and style are nice I just think it needs a better finish. More details and focals as well as a different font + color scheme. Not bad though.
Dex Posted December 18, 2013 Posted December 18, 2013 I agree with Jordan, it needs better blending and a different font for sure.
Lockmonster00 Posted December 18, 2013 Author Posted December 18, 2013 What kind of font would ya'll suggest?
Basic Posted December 18, 2013 Posted December 18, 2013 This looks dope man, add in some nice lighting and fx and it's dope.
Designer Posted December 18, 2013 Posted December 18, 2013 Different font imo too. Also needs so work work lightsource and shading. Now it´s all over too bright and due that lacks focal point. Only thing that catches the eye is the pink text that is powering out heavily. I´d use slight darker red to make it easier for the eye and to blend more with rest.