Radioactive series

[Boudewijn07]

Hey guys, i am making Radioactive series and this is my first one i am giving the imageshack link because then you can watch it on full size

Please leave feedback, and what i should be doing better, Ty:)

 

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/545/radioactive.jpg/

 

 

 

For the non clickers:  v1He is loading very slow, be patient ;p

v2

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited May 2, 2013 by Boudewijn07

[Rusko]

You have A LOT of concepts to learn and work on..

[Kyle1]

http://prntscr.com/13746i

On the left and right of the screen shot, this added things look way out of place and don't seem to help the piece at all. Instead rather they harm it by making it look, hate to say it, but kind of childish. 

[Boudewijn07]

http://prntscr.com/13746i

On the left and right of the screen shot, this added things look way out of place and don't seem to help the piece at all. Instead rather they harm it by making it look, hate to say it, but kind of childish. 

Thanks for the feedback, i never did those kind of pictures etc, normaly big text effect and stuff, trying to learn it thats why i am posting these for your guys feedback, i know that  i am not so good at these

Edited May 3, 2013 by Boudewijn07

[Holyassasin]

Learn a little more about GFX and you'll do great!