Deceiver Posted October 25, 2016 Author Posted October 25, 2016 the more that i look at it the less i start liking it. the striping is half way done. the shine that comes from behind and reflects on the cloud are messy done. feel like you didnt take your time and rushed it. did you follow his tut tho? no i dont like his stuff
Arjen Posted October 25, 2016 Posted October 25, 2016 no i dont like his stuff he bassicly does the samething with the lines, but a bit more advanced i think
EffectArts Posted November 15, 2016 Posted November 15, 2016 The idea is fine, but the execution lacks real lightsource and depth. Theres no real flow to follow nor focal point. With some adjustments this will look way better. Keep it up