Deceiver Posted October 25, 2016 Author Share Posted October 25, 2016 the more that i look at it the less i start liking it. the striping is half way done. the shine that comes from behind and reflects on the cloud are messy done. feel like you didnt take your time and rushed it. did you follow his tut tho? no i dont like his stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arjen Posted October 25, 2016 Share Posted October 25, 2016 no i dont like his stuff he bassicly does the samething with the lines, but a bit more advanced i think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m4tis Posted November 15, 2016 Share Posted November 15, 2016 Wow. Awesome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EffectArts Posted November 15, 2016 Share Posted November 15, 2016 The idea is fine, but the execution lacks real lightsource and depth. Theres no real flow to follow nor focal point. With some adjustments this will look way better. Keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
