My feedback for your channel ;)
- What I often see which works the best is start working with montages with big plays forinstance, with some nice music on the background it's entertaining to watch. Once you start getting a pretty steady amounts of likes & views on all your uploads and your community wants you to do commentaries etc you can start doing them. It's the same for streaming on Twitch. If you already have a steady youtube fanbase it's way easier to get your standard livestream viewers (the higher viewers you have at the start, the easier it gets, streaming for 1-3 people is demotivating). This is how people like DutchSmash and DodgedLol forinstance got big.
- Everyone mentioned this already but the mic quality is a little bit mweh so might be smart to invest in (as mentioned before) in a blue yeti mic.
- Try to stick your content to 1 or 2 games max.
Make your logo/profile picture transparent (I am not sure if Google/YouTube ignores it and gives it a standard white background). If you don't know how to do that, feel free to add me on skype and I ll try make it transparent for you: atw.swapping
If you want an advice on other stuff let me know ;)
- Snailex