I don't normally do text signatures, so i'd like some CnC.

 

I got a request, so I tried my best at it.

 

Honestly.. it hurts me eyes

 

• The colours don't blend well
• The icy(?) background seems poorly made
• The text font/effects don't seem to match

Keep practicing though. Have seen some of your other work and loved quite a few of your pieces, especially your Irelia Wallpaper on devART

Honestly.. it hurts me eyes

 

• The colours don't blend well
• The icy(?) background seems poorly made
• The text font/effects don't seem to match

Keep practicing though. Have seen some of your other work and loved quite a few of your pieces, especially your Irelia Wallpaper on devART

Thank you. I always try to avoid doing signatures with just text, so I figure if i'm going to tackle it, I need all of the criticism I can get so each one gets better.

Could be better. The font is hard to see. :|

Could be better. The font is hard to see. :|

Yeah, was my concern. I did a bunch of stuff to make it pop out more, but I guess I should have done more.

 

Thank you.

Please give it another try, start from scratch and post it. ^_^

Font is not very appealing. You could use some warm color instead of the purpleish. Text is also hard to read since it´s covered with the mess

A typefaces readability is always top priority. Don't select a typeface that is too difficult to read or obstruct it unless it's serving purely as an art piece. Not fully sure what you were going for either. Try and hone in on your ideas before executing.