zaros784 Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 I don't normally do text signatures, so i'd like some CnC. I got a request, so I tried my best at it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Booch Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 Honestly.. it hurts me eyes The colours don't blend well The icy(?) background seems poorly made The text font/effects don't seem to match Keep practicing though. Have seen some of your other work and loved quite a few of your pieces, especially your Irelia Wallpaper on devART 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zaros784 Posted April 20, 2014 Author Share Posted April 20, 2014 Honestly.. it hurts me eyes The colours don't blend well The icy(?) background seems poorly made The text font/effects don't seem to match Keep practicing though. Have seen some of your other work and loved quite a few of your pieces, especially your Irelia Wallpaper on devART Thank you. I always try to avoid doing signatures with just text, so I figure if i'm going to tackle it, I need all of the criticism I can get so each one gets better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImaRawrrr Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 Could be better. The font is hard to see. :| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zaros784 Posted April 20, 2014 Author Share Posted April 20, 2014 Could be better. The font is hard to see. :| Yeah, was my concern. I did a bunch of stuff to make it pop out more, but I guess I should have done more. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Booch Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 Please give it another try, start from scratch and post it. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Designer Posted April 21, 2014 Share Posted April 21, 2014 Font is not very appealing. You could use some warm color instead of the purpleish. Text is also hard to read since it´s covered with the mess 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chemistry Posted April 22, 2014 Share Posted April 22, 2014 A typefaces readability is always top priority. Don't select a typeface that is too difficult to read or obstruct it unless it's serving purely as an art piece. Not fully sure what you were going for either. Try and hone in on your ideas before executing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
