February 11, 201411 yr Just something I wrote. Put together pretty fast (like 5-10min lol). But I used to write alot when I was depressed, and felt like writing today for the first time in awhile. Anyways, what do you think?
February 11, 201411 yr Author I'd add some more commas to be honest. Okay that's just a grammar issue though. Feedback nonetheless,thanks.
February 11, 201411 yr Okay that's just a grammar issue though. Feedback nonetheless,thanks. Well, no offence, but it looks like its been written by an edgy, angsty teenager.
February 11, 201411 yr Well, no offence, but it looks like its been written by an edgy, angsty teenager.
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