xNeyaa Posted October 27, 2013 Share Posted October 27, 2013 (edited) tell me what you think. c4d only Edited October 27, 2013 by xNeyaa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reflex Posted October 27, 2013 Share Posted October 27, 2013 Your material combined with the lighting setup makes it a bit dull, your reds don't come out as bright reds, and your edges aren't defined enough. Try placing either coloured lights to enhance colours or try placing some indirect lighting to enhance the edges a bit. Anyhow be sure to kiu 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xNeyaa Posted October 27, 2013 Author Share Posted October 27, 2013 Your material combined with the lighting setup makes it a bit dull, your reds don't come out as bright reds, and your edges aren't defined enough. Try placing either coloured lights to enhance colours or try placing some indirect lighting to enhance the edges a bit. Anyhow be sure to kiu yeh, the reds are supposed to be lava kindof, but thanks for the feedback m8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan Posted October 27, 2013 Share Posted October 27, 2013 I like the texture it has, but as Reflex said it is a bit dull. I wouldn't be too sure light would be the best for that texture but maybe a variation in the amounts of red in different spots? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xNeyaa Posted October 27, 2013 Author Share Posted October 27, 2013 (edited) I like the texture it has, but as Reflex said it is a bit dull. I wouldn't be too sure light would be the best for that texture but maybe a variation in the amounts of red in different spots? i can try making the red brighter and breaking the text so it looks more textured.. but since its a c4d material its hard the change the spots :P Edited October 27, 2013 by xNeyaa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan Posted October 27, 2013 Share Posted October 27, 2013 I like the texture it has, but as Reflex said it is a bit dull. I wouldn't be too sure light would be the best for that texture but maybe a variation in the amounts of red in different spots? i can try making the red brighter and breaking the text so it looks more textured.. but since its a c4d material its hard the change the spots Understood, overall it looks good though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xNeyaa Posted October 27, 2013 Author Share Posted October 27, 2013 I like the texture it has, but as Reflex said it is a bit dull. I wouldn't be too sure light would be the best for that texture but maybe a variation in the amounts of red in different spots? i can try making the red brighter and breaking the text so it looks more textured.. but since its a c4d material its hard the change the spots Understood, overall it looks good though. Thanks =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitrousek Posted October 27, 2013 Share Posted October 27, 2013 Nice, but there's too much noise in my opinion, I'd add in some kind of minor blur. That might be just me though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xNeyaa Posted October 29, 2013 Author Share Posted October 29, 2013 Nice, but there's too much noise in my opinion, I'd add in some kind of minor blur. That might be just me though. Thanks for feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hades Posted October 29, 2013 Share Posted October 29, 2013 you used "dare template" All you added was a cinema 4d effect (lava). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reflex Posted October 29, 2013 Share Posted October 29, 2013 (edited) you used "dare template" All you added was a cinema 4d effect (lava). Since it's a dare logo, how do you know that's true, i doubt it really since the light setup looks way different judging by the images. Who says he didn't just get the dare logo and place an extrude nurbs on it witht the material. The dare logo is in like every gfx pack. And even if it is true, there's nothing wrong with doing so for beginners to learn and understand workings of a program. Edited October 29, 2013 by Reflex Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xNeyaa Posted October 29, 2013 Author Share Posted October 29, 2013 (edited) you used "dare template" All you added was a cinema 4d effect (lava). Its a clan logo, i used the .ai ( the outlines ) doubt u even know what that is. + i made the texture myself. you used "dare template" All you added was a cinema 4d effect (lava). Since it's a dare logo, how do you know that's true, i doubt it really since the light setup looks way different judging by the images. Who says he didn't just get the dare logo and place an extrude nurbs on it witht the material. The dare logo is in like every gfx pack. And even if it is true, there's nothing wrong with doing so for beginners to learn and understand workings of a program. yeh, i used the .ai and added extrude nerbs and broke the object up uisng thrauzi. Edited October 29, 2013 by xNeyaa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zur Posted October 29, 2013 Share Posted October 29, 2013 Not bad, with some photoshop work this could be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xNeyaa Posted October 29, 2013 Author Share Posted October 29, 2013 Not bad, with some photoshop work this could be good. Thanks, and yeah im gonna do something with it in photoshop. Probably making a youtube banner of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terced Posted October 31, 2013 Share Posted October 31, 2013 I'd make the red more lava-like by mixing up different hues of red Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
