Use the rule of thirds for text, if you are not sure what it is google it. The text needs to be closer to the focal point which is your render. There is too much empty space, use a smaller canvas next time.
The text is just the x breaker and reaper x plug in on C4D.
http://gyazo.com/b45ebba4808847e59c776e09c77b89ad
Then I just spam fractals, gradient maps and motion blurs.
